Covenant 6 and 7 posted at last

[ostarella]

Well, bit the bullet and posted Chapters 6 and 7 to ffnet and my website. Have to send a reminder to the Archive, too - remind them of the earlier chapters being out there and that I've added these two now.

I got a compliment from an apparently new reader the other day - basically said no matter what the situation I put them in, I treat the characters "with respect". I thought that was kinda nice. Actually, I thought it was terrific <G> 

Well, going to try and get more done on 8 today. My brother's down and it's always hard to concentrate on writing when someone else is in the house. Good excuse, right? Actually I'm trying to think of that next sentence - you know the one. The one that starts the ball rolling and shoves the rest of the chapter down your throat before you know what's happening.

So evasive...

Comments

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

I really do have to read the new version. Really, it was a great story, and now I'm especially anxious to see the changes. :-)

Frankie a Mary Sue? You hit the nail on the head. The curious thing to me was how Face seemed to spend so much time with him at first. I would think those two would get along like oil and water - one relaxed and confident, the other such a total...and so arrogant without cause! At least Amy and Tawnia both knew their "roles" with the team...

Now I gotta go to bed - working graveyard shift is killing my day times...

[beckyblack]

Maybe Face let him tag along on the same principle as one might go out "on the pull" and take along a less attractive friend. ;-)

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

Oh geez - I used to do that. Come to think of it, that's how I met the first guy I was engaged to.

No wonder I don't do it any more