Chapter 8 progress

[ostarella]

I ran into a stumbling block with 8 - there was one small scene I wanted to include, just to anchor things with canon. I figured it was just a small thing, and even though I wanted it in there, it was bugging me as to how to do it. I couldn't figure out how the details from the scene in the show could fit, realistically, into this story. Nor how to "casually" bring it up. So, this morning, half-asleep, it came to me. Both solutions.

One - I took canon too literally.

Two - instead of making it an incidental - make it the culminating point of the chapter, *and* it figures heavily into the why's of the rest of the story.

I am Brilliant.

Okay, maybe just brighter than a burned out light bulb  ;-)

It was so neat, though - all I had to do was add two sentences to what I already had written and it changed the whole feeling of the chapter. That's what I love about writing - when suddenly, everything just...fits.

Now I just have to find time to get down and dirty with the details.

Comments

[beckyblack]

Female villains are probably the trickiest of all villains to write! I've done a couple in the past, and I'm doing one right now in the NaNo and I've got one for a future A-Team bunny that's in the planning stage. I just hope they work!

There's an odd sort of feeling that women doing bad things is worse than men doing the exact same bad things. As if they are betraying some ideal of femininity, some higher standard that men aren't held to. Not to say that men are forgiven for not reaching that standard, but more that they aren't even expected to be able to reach it.

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

Yeah, like there's some kind of psychology at work there - women villains are so bad, because we put the "evilness" we'd like to do into them - and we're not *supposed* to have that evilness, so we have to make it *really* bad (slapping our own wrists). But we condescendingly accept that men are inherently flawed, therefore, it's okay for them to do bad things without being evil.

Man, I just don't understand women. LOL