Chapter 8 progress

[ostarella]

I ran into a stumbling block with 8 - there was one small scene I wanted to include, just to anchor things with canon. I figured it was just a small thing, and even though I wanted it in there, it was bugging me as to how to do it. I couldn't figure out how the details from the scene in the show could fit, realistically, into this story. Nor how to "casually" bring it up. So, this morning, half-asleep, it came to me. Both solutions.

One - I took canon too literally.

Two - instead of making it an incidental - make it the culminating point of the chapter, *and* it figures heavily into the why's of the rest of the story.

I am Brilliant.

Okay, maybe just brighter than a burned out light bulb  ;-)

It was so neat, though - all I had to do was add two sentences to what I already had written and it changed the whole feeling of the chapter. That's what I love about writing - when suddenly, everything just...fits.

Now I just have to find time to get down and dirty with the details.

Comments

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

You mean you didn't rush back and start typing? LOL One of the niceties about being single - when I do crazy stuff like that in the middle of the night, the only ones I have to explain it to are my dogs - and they already know I'm a little daft. ;-)

[billy-shriner.livejournal.com]

lol! well, now I have a new pc and it doesn't take so long to boot up, I was v. tempted... hubby was out on a works xmas do, so I didn't have to explain myself to anyone ;o) but I had to start work early in the morning, (Friday nights now are early nights!) so I knew it would be a big mistake to boot up again. I have a notepad by my bed, so I noted it down in there ;o)

[beckyblack]

Oh, you've got to have the notepad by the bed! :D

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

I sleep on the couch in the living room - about 10 feet from my computer.

Save the trees!

I know... 8-|

[beckyblack]

I've got a personal rule. I'm not allowed to take my laptop into the bedroom. If I allowed that to happen, I'd never get any sleep at all! And if I got myself a wi-fi network going so I could access the internet from anywhere in the house, forget it! I'd never get out of bed at all!

[ostarella.livejournal.com]

Oh man - writing a story, on a laptop, in bed - mini fridge within arm's reach - HEAVEN!! LOL

[billy-shriner.livejournal.com]

lol!

[billy-shriner.livejournal.com]

yeah, I think you gave me that idea!!! ;o)