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ostarella ([personal profile] ostarella) wrote2008-03-04 01:33 pm

Wasting time...:D

Well, I'm having a heck of a time getting through this next chapter. I have your bath scene done, guys, but not sure if it's going to be exactly what you were looking for ;-)  But now I'm working on the chase scene, and I spend more time "reviewing it" (and laughing my ass off) than I do writing. But Face is having fun!  LOL

Start back to work Sunday night for a three week stint, so want to get as much done before that as I can, but I did a lot of writing while I was working all the time, so hopefully once I get used to the graveyard shift again it won't slow things down too much. And once I get through the movie it'll move faster, too, of course :-)

So maybe have this chapter done this afternoon, evening, ready for review...

[identity profile] billy-shriner.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
hey, while we wait, we can always read the bath scene ;o) lol! Glad to hear you've got your priorities right there! Bath scene finished!! Oh I imagine Face has a hell of time with that chase scene...remember to describe that red shirt now...and how hot he looks... or are you not doing Jenny's pov - shame?
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[personal profile] beckyblack 2008-03-04 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
and how hot he looks... or are you not doing Jenny's pov - shame?

But it's a serious story you know. Would a page of "Phwoaarrrr! Bloody hell!! Wibble! Wibble!" etc. be suitable?

[identity profile] billy-shriner.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)

But it's a serious story you know. Would a page of "Phwoaarrrr! Bloody hell!! Wibble! Wibble!" etc. be suitable?

lol! yeah, but with all the bad things that have happened, it might nice to read something *light*. ;O)

Anyway, that's your thoughts, not Jenny's!!!!

[identity profile] ostarella.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I only know what one of those terms really means - but I'm thinking it might not work here. ;-)

[identity profile] billy-shriner.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
well you and me both, must be the northern gibberish she speaks ;o)

[identity profile] ostarella.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry - not doing anyone's POV except Face's here (another experiment, I guess). But good news (hopefully) is that I actually shut off the movie and finished the chapter - so up in a few minutes. ;-)

[identity profile] billy-shriner.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
oh goodie! Although really should be writing!!!